-09-0123:38:08 review a chapter:133(click into the chapter reviewed)
Decided at that time that the on bed terms point of departure made a contract, one because Japanese background of this novel, the point of departure one who had very multiracial doctrine, I was afraid be criticized by them injured all over the body;Two because I don't want to be tied up my own writing progress;Three then because a reader say very to, not much, my readers joining VIP is really nothing important value and smile.
You like good.There is the time of feeling say a , this is the ＾ that was good to give something back to ＾ to an author.
Is another:I really is like that you quote from of in Alps a certain stone tablet there up engrave of that sentence ＾＾ .
Read:[Essence]seem the author isn't very happy that we give to have an end bottom judgment, smile.However canning see from a section of today is very a little bit interesting, had a parable and words"as long as I can't gave up by myself, that we always didn't end" that the end oneself's in the mind beat, with this, can imagine hereafter will have a lot of fascinating details.Make reference to here, suddenly think of, before thousand leaves of in the life, many farmland letters are what oneself withdrews, the rock farmland guarded, the long valley Chuan is also similar, originally saw will insist of ascend original sun on finally being also oneself to give up, is this purely and strangely fits?Put not to give up, probably as a result really different.The south of the Qie<9-123:07& amps;gt;
Write:Certainly, all boys were continuously judged death penalty by the reader, what does the author still leave?Behind concerning have the end details of one Mi, fascinatingly not say, I write of novel, perhaps leave fascinatingly is have certain distance, smile.However, should be still well worth seeing.I feel to write to have the end one Mi to is a very interesting process.The boy like this has no prototype in my life, so, can well develop my imagination ＾＾ .The forest recreation class& amp;lt;9-217:53& amps;gt;
Read: [Essence]end tail inside, fix to ask thousand leaves"you choice male friend of standard is above original sun a for according to?"Suddenly think, fix is actually a while asking this words what mood.After all his own personality was totally different at first with brilliant top.With he so sensitive but sharp personality, will have what viewpoint?The 20-year-old birthday is really a turn to order, although it is said leave oneself still farer, smile.Thousand foliar future, ha, don't guess or not, who know?The south of the Qie<9-123:11& amps;gt;
Write:Sometimes, I will have a kind of illusion, you is still like also the author of this novel, and connecting details like thises will thought of and smile.This mind, while writing, I once had as well, so, just wrote Chu-tien to fix the action of playing the melody of continuing.The action like that is a kind of afraid revelation heart true mood but do of the dissimulation of subconscious.However, I think and discover that oneself isn't the ideal opposite sex type of the person whom he or she likes, career many peoples like this will have.Although is very suffered, must support ＾＾ as well.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;9-217:57& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]sweat …… have no others to like to fix this role?The commentary that turns over the next past, seem quite so, explode sweat ……and I also discover an interesting phenomenon at the same time, the others mostly call that Chu-tien fixs to fix for Chu-tien, only having I being old to call he for.Doing not know that this is actually that I am personal is more lazy(a little word ……==),beats by dre cheap, still another of what pleased bad idea ……he is also really introversive, can say childishness, not that kind of have a liking for go to and can give very much people the sense of security of man, but agree the author's words, more dependable ……ha ha.Say a lot of have of have no of, more power to you, I can probably also see one 56 day, smile.Expect.The south of the Qie<9-123:17& amps;gt;
Write:Also not is have no, however, will be less, smile.He very childishness?Sweat.I just feel that he will than other people's much some sharp angles, it is said that that single mother's keeping big boys will have characteristic like this.So, he would at up original sun one in front say that kind of words ＾＾ .Who say that he can't give people with the sense of security, and have the end one Mi, many farmlands Be handsome to compare with, I feel that he has a sense of security many and smile.Is true, if isn't a simplicity from the strong consideration of outward appearance, he is more many than those ideas or the person who hasn't grown up obviously will even have a some sense of security.He like a person to will also hold out for long time than the other people, even is whole life.Is an author certainly of I not ability put in a good word for him here, but should at behind of come out the ＾＾ to the those advantages of his expression in details.
Read:[Essence]finally enter before the placard total number of words are 200, at the beginning you still say to write so long. Is really difficult to see<9-219:00& amps;gt;
Write:Thank you to at the beginning remind, smile.Because you remind at that time, it makes me suddenly become clear suddenly, sweat, in fact be not so, true reason is in addition to this, I also have no another of what placard can be used as to struggle a target of==.Although the novel writes longly also not is what ability, however, I have an ultimate end target now, be fight for into a total number of words placard of front 100, this should be able to attain ＾＾ .Thank.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;9-219:20& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]ha, not late not late.Oneself is home again to at the right moment see and smile.Does this section pour to have no a lot of details, almost and all is thousand leaves et al's mental state depiction on the cocktail party, mostly also confirmed some reader's viewpoint that I like to guess blindly like this of being likes, ha.Pay no attention, the author has already written so long.Possible oneself is making track for one section what one section see, so didn't notice, smiled.No matter how it is, congratulate Luo first.Is doing not know that the author also writes much long, if enough long, I stay winter vacation to at a stretch see and smile.Good Luo.Expect.The south of the Qie<9-223:50& amps;gt;
Write:Details a little bit greatly developed to want after 23 chapters ＾＾ .This several chapters after be all saying the affair observing a festival year end.Should pretty grow, because just writing to thousand leaves is 20 years old, there is also university for two years and social article.I suddenly forgot I by myself always at say of a matter:In fact I the space of this novel is in the growth at the same time, a little bit another compare me the author before the row of novel of space also in the growth, so, is 100 before entering still really have a little difficulty ＾＾ .The forest recreation class& amp;lt;9-300:02& amps;gt;
Read:Net friend:Such as person drinking commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:10 announce time:2004-09-0223:39:05 review a chapter:134(click into the chapter reviewed)
How delineate the everyone person's idea must how properly, rather than display author of wishful, be really make me admire and respect too much.
I can say that this is true ah, this is true of ah.Then, the forest makes it really great in this aspect.
Read:Net friend:Such as person drinking commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:10 announce time:2004-09-0223:41:24 review a chapter:134(click into the chapter reviewed)
Have the end Mi one insight really is very violent, the mindset that then can understand the other party in second a short moment in cent.
Write:Net friend:Forest recreation class commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:5 announce time:2004-09-0300:04:47 review a chapter:134(click into the chapter reviewed)
I like to surmise the mindset of person a certain time from the position of everybody's oneself and smile.
I feel that have the person whom the end one Mi should be this novel inside to guess the most severe other people's intention, because of, also only have the person of very perspicacious, just probably become a successful politician ＾＾ .
Certainly, the past also had the reader the person for saying my style of writing, each person thinks Be getting tooer many, sweat.
Read:Net friend:Break sound commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:10 announce time:2004-09-03 10:4
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